who else writes(update page2)

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toddluck@hotmail.com's avatar
who else writes(update page2)
toddluck's avatar
toddluck
+1y
may seem kinda gay but i do it...to my wife

UPSIDE DOWN AND INSIDE OUT

we are upside down and inside out
our lives have changed there is no doubt

We have no time, For one another
Our son has sisters, And them a brother


It takes up our time,Seems like all day
When we hit the sack,And just want to lay

To close our eyes, And call it a day
We have have what we want,And thats why we pray!!

I now have daughers that I've never had
Three little girls now calling me DAD


I want be be differant than the father they have known
I want to show my mother, The way I have grown


The life we have drempt, Is now compleate
Some times we go nuts,sometimes A defeat


Our struggles been long..Seemed never ending
We have a new Life,,A new beggining


So as always I promise,I will be your man!!!
Through trials and stess I'll do what I can.


Your the love dreams were when, I was I was a boy
Your the Loves now the Life That I now I enjoy


I try not to forget,that you have your needs
sometimes not seen till you plant the seeds

I'm starting to babble,And sound all like girled
Let there never be doubt YOU ARE MY WORLD

I lOve you baby....Todd
Post was last edited on Oct 13, 2008 05:10. Edited 1 time.
crazymikey's avatar
crazymikey
+1y
That was actually quite good Todd. Never thought you'd be one to do that.
sosatheshark's avatar
sosatheshark
+1y
that was really good,i write shit in my head but when i try to write it down i forget lol
jmzcustomz (jeff)'s avatar
jmzcustomz (jeff)
+1y
Yeah not so much on the writing here... Todd you have some natural talent for sure. I found my self wanting to pasionatly make sweet puppy love to you. LOL j/k.
I did find it quite awsome though. How long did it take you to write it?
toddluck's avatar
toddluck
+1y
took about 20 minutes and stay away from my backside...lol
jmzcustomz (jeff)'s avatar
jmzcustomz (jeff)
+1y
Dont worry I was aiming for the head. LOL

That is kool. It took me like 15 min just to get 2 lines for a small card on some flowers for our anniversary some time ago.
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crazymikey
+1y
Let me guess...

"Roses are red,violets are blue, I like very much to make sexytime with you"

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toddluck's avatar
toddluck
+1y
I just wrote this for my baby girl
mom took her from me 8 1/2 years ago
I had no idea where they even were until recently
when mom decided it was time for me to be a "dad"

i miss her soooo much

any way here it is

A poem for Daddy's little girl

These are some words,Straight from my heart
I hurt everyday, That we are apart


I havent seen you, No choice of my own
I havent seen you ,And the way you have grown


I miss you today,And even more tomorrow
havent done my part,And I feel the sorrow

My first little girl, The only one I have had
I hope you smile, When you think of your dad

We dont know each other,For 8 1/2 years
We dont know each other,And that brings my tears

I think about you,Morning noon and night
I think about things,I havent done right

I dream about kisses ,hugs and smiles
I cant have them now,There are to many miles

So just let me say,You are my baby
No if's and or but's,Not even a maybe

I love and miss you Coly more than you will ever know


LOVE DADDY
91b2200(cody)'s avatar
91b2200(cody)
+1y
very good todd ..
jmzcustomz (jeff)'s avatar
jmzcustomz (jeff)
+1y
Dude that almost made me cry.....